tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post848949572553430095..comments2023-03-28T10:53:45.900-04:00Comments on Ramblings and Romance: All We KnewUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-54332056033403449072010-11-19T11:59:01.000-05:002010-11-19T11:59:01.000-05:00Wow. Strong feelings here, falling, falling. Prett...Wow. Strong feelings here, falling, falling. Pretty powerful little excerpt. If the rest of the book is this good, you've got a very strong project going.Mike Robertsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-38408228987346976882010-11-19T12:18:50.000-05:002010-11-19T12:18:50.000-05:00hmmm...i could feel actually feel it.....fantastic...hmmm...i could feel actually feel it.....fantasticHeathernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-77890475863349508802010-11-19T15:51:39.000-05:002010-11-19T15:51:39.000-05:00Lovely. The thought of free falling without knowin...Lovely. The thought of free falling without knowing where you'll land terrifies me but you wrote it beautifully.Vandamirhttp://vandamir.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-63276351463734402682010-11-18T14:42:17.000-05:002010-11-18T14:42:17.000-05:00I love this line Sel- 'Your touch draws out pi...I love this line Sel- 'Your touch draws out pieces of me better kept hidden, but in your light they are beautiful.' It's so touching and poignant. Beautifully written, and a very strong piece of work.! :)Pat Holletthttp://patriciahollett.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-8449323394520953032010-11-19T08:40:42.000-05:002010-11-19T08:40:42.000-05:00deeply touched by thisdeeply touched by thisfictdoodleshttp://fictdoodles.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-77202984399294133532010-11-19T11:01:13.000-05:002010-11-19T11:01:13.000-05:00oh. nice... A touch of hope and then it is all yan...oh. nice... A touch of hope and then it is all yanked away.Firewolfhttp://www.writerjacampbell.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-41680032243241031212010-11-19T11:17:37.000-05:002010-11-19T11:17:37.000-05:00Thanks for the comments, everyone :) It's real...Thanks for the comments, everyone :) <br><br>It's really interesting to read them knowing some of you know Elle and some don't :) Soon though... (*focuses on holiday releases instead--more than enough stress right there*) <br><br>I do know when I started book 2, I was floundering with Elle's emotions, so this sort of thing will really help me focus that aspect of things :)Selestenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-5735603058576757172010-11-19T07:03:14.000-05:002010-11-19T07:03:14.000-05:00Poor lonely faller. I've been playing with a s...Poor lonely faller. I've been playing with a story about inexplicable falling lately, hadn't thought to drop someone in with the victim. There wouldn't be safety about this, so spread your arms and enjoy the rush...John Wiswellhttp://www.johnwiswell.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-26803498703273824572010-11-23T18:50:49.000-05:002010-11-23T18:50:49.000-05:00Beautiful and wrenching, all at the same time.Beautiful and wrenching, all at the same time.Cathy Websterhttp://muskokariver.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-43934587705553660862010-11-20T03:46:16.000-05:002010-11-20T03:46:16.000-05:00Very nice! I love your writing style!Very nice! I love your writing style!angela addamshttp://www.angelaaddams.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-8929203457427962872010-11-21T05:49:22.000-05:002010-11-21T05:49:22.000-05:00What a beautiful, heartbreaking piece.What a beautiful, heartbreaking piece.ganymederhttp://www.ganymeder.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-48498103726015586242010-11-21T06:12:19.000-05:002010-11-21T06:12:19.000-05:00Very cool story! Flowed very nicely.Very cool story! Flowed very nicely.Eric J. Krausehttp://ejkwritingspot.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-87477290026152623452010-11-18T10:48:34.000-05:002010-11-18T10:48:34.000-05:00I love this, Sel! I'm so glad we sucked you in...I love this, Sel! I'm so glad we sucked you into the dark side. ;)<br><br>"In your light they are beautiful" ~ I love this and the last line brings it home. Great job!Danielle La Pagliahttp://www.daniellelapaglia.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-81325391039335623822010-11-18T11:07:24.000-05:002010-11-18T11:07:24.000-05:00[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Laura ...[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Laura and Danielle La Paglia, Seleste deLaney. Seleste deLaney said: Okay, you people sucked me in. New #FridayFlash -- All We Knew http://bit.ly/aAfkSg [...]Tweets that mention All We Knew : : Seleste DeLaney -- Topsy.comhttp://topsy.com/trackback?url=http%3A%2F%2Fselestedelaney.com%2Fwordpress%2F%3Fp%3D445&utm_source=pingback&utm_campaign=L2noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-85462556738901131442010-11-18T11:13:08.000-05:002010-11-18T11:13:08.000-05:00The same line hit me as Danni. I know the backgrou...The same line hit me as Danni. I know the background for Elle, but I hope I get to see what's got her in freefall.jaxhttp://jax-tangledyarns.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com