tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post2498953505423083046..comments2023-03-28T10:53:45.900-04:00Comments on Ramblings and Romance: Worse Than DeathUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-57559991928238493132010-12-31T09:29:01.000-05:002010-12-31T09:29:01.000-05:00Thanks guys :) Danni: I totally needed to change t...Thanks guys :) <br><br>Danni: I totally needed to change things up. I'll finish the series, but I want to do it right. <br><br>Julio: Haha busted. I hate descriptions. I generally don't like reading them so they are a huge weakness of mine with regard to writing. Still working on it. :)<br><br>John: I LOVE John McClane. You'll have to let me know if I slip back to my old ways. I need someone to keep me on my toes :)Selestenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-56671164365724995862010-12-31T15:25:01.000-05:002010-12-31T15:25:01.000-05:00A fate worse than death, indeed. How I do *hate* z...A fate worse than death, indeed. How I do *hate* zombies.<br><br>Excellent entry for the genre. It ran right downhill to hell - taking the reader along for the ride.<br><br>Well done.KjMhttp://kjmackey.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-23316855729099523092010-12-31T12:17:56.000-05:002010-12-31T12:17:56.000-05:00Fun ride with a sharp ending. I always enjoy zombi...Fun ride with a sharp ending. I always enjoy zombies, and the ending makes this story sing. I wouldn't want to suffer the dead gnawing on my, either.David G Shrockhttp://www.kandyfangs.com/?p=90noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-1546549393083589582010-12-31T12:46:42.000-05:002010-12-31T12:46:42.000-05:00Seleste, you already know what I think of this lit...Seleste, you already know what I think of this little change up. Yes, you needed to bust out for a while. Totally dig the zombie take on the prompt.David Wilson-Burnshttp://fictdoodles.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-75511932131033685892010-12-31T17:40:52.000-05:002010-12-31T17:40:52.000-05:00Desparate times and all that. Makes me wonder what...Desparate times and all that. Makes me wonder what it would take to get me to do "the deed". Nice writing and thanks.Donald Conradhttp://flashtold.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-63252501709877862112011-01-02T17:24:25.000-05:002011-01-02T17:24:25.000-05:00Oooh!! Nice and gory! Wasn't expecting a man i...Oooh!! Nice and gory! Wasn't expecting a man in the closet. A well written piece Sel. Zombies are creepy! :)Pat Holletthttp://patriciahollett.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-324801811587385972011-01-01T03:09:30.000-05:002011-01-01T03:09:30.000-05:00I like a nice bit of grisly zombie horror, good st...I like a nice bit of grisly zombie horror, good story Seleste. :DSteve Greenhttp://greenstephenj.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-18192819121262173662011-01-01T12:36:24.000-05:002011-01-01T12:36:24.000-05:00Yay! Vive the Zombies!Please do more for 2011:)Yay! Vive the Zombies!<br><br>Please do more for 2011:)Anne Michaudhttp://livyparker.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-57556249545613012682011-01-01T15:12:18.000-05:002011-01-01T15:12:18.000-05:00I like the spooky change! You set scenes very well...I like the spooky change! You set scenes very well, and the ending was chiling.jaxhttp://jax-tangledyarns.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-81942613916113129732011-01-02T06:52:37.000-05:002011-01-02T06:52:37.000-05:00Oh nice... yay zombies! That was vivid.Julie/Fire...Oh nice... yay zombies! That was vivid.<br><br>Julie/FirewolfFirewolfhttp://www.writerjacampbell.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-686738349896301492011-01-02T07:50:06.000-05:002011-01-02T07:50:06.000-05:00The grizzled man got what he deserved. I found my...The grizzled man got what he deserved. I found myself curious how she lost her shoes and ended up with the shards of glass in her heel.Aidan Fritzhttp://aidanwrites.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-68661344022564776232011-01-02T15:05:53.000-05:002011-01-02T15:05:53.000-05:00Vicious, vicious story. Yeah, I think I'd rath...Vicious, vicious story. Yeah, I think I'd rather go out with a knife to the throat than being torn at by zombies.Eric J. Krausehttp://ejkwritingspot.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-19287250077854858742010-12-30T19:36:40.000-05:002010-12-30T19:36:40.000-05:00Yay! Sel does zombies! (well...not "does"...Yay! Sel does zombies! (well...not "does" zombies, but...you know). :)<br><br>Seriously, great job this week. I'm glad you took David up on his prompt. The ending was fantastic!Danielle La Pagliahttp://www.daniellelapaglia.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-920446450570958212.post-32004515811655119442010-12-30T20:08:30.000-05:002010-12-30T20:08:30.000-05:00[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by PJ Sch...[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by PJ Schnyder. PJ Schnyder said: RT @SelestedeLaney: Are you brave enough? http://bit.ly/e9NzYO "Worse Than Death" #FridayFlash [...]Tweets that mention Are you brave enough? 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In this case, finding the salve made me think of a relieved John McClane.<br><br>When I was fantasizing about Die Hard, I was still enjoying this. It's a little more vulnerable than the previous things I've read from you, in a certain physical dimension I can't quite figure out.John Wiswellhttp://www.johnwiswell.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com